[ Free Talk ] Writer Editor and Reader
Hi Editors,Yesterday, I am reading a book of writing stylist.
Later I made a serious thinking about the editor job and task.
A good writer need a good editor and writer need more readers.
I have some questions what is job for an professional editor ?
I am wondering, what is are they doing exactly.
For example, When you receieve and new paper.
What do you do ? How do you make your best edit ?
Regarding the 12th simwe journal,
It appears aba_aba is manager of jouranl, alexqxp is the editor in chief ?
What is exactly style for our journal ? aba_aba dreams for a " Scientific Chinese".
alexqxp has made many experience with simwe journal before.
What is the exactly difference between a magazine journal and newsletters ?
I write a report for 2nd simwe competition last week, Now I am reviewing the report.
Suddenly I realized it's probably well speaked but not very well written indeed.
if we are still dreaming for a " Scientific Chinese".
Therefore I plan to edit my report from a new read's view-point.
What can I do this ? Any suggstion or tips ?
How can I help you to have good quality paper,
How can we increase the reader's number and quality for our Simwe journal ? 我又编辑了一下，但是还不是很满意，
现在各位请校对，zxzxzx00 aba_aba xiaov hjli6
1. 请看看总体是否有缺陷？
我们的目标是向会员宣传Simwe 和竞赛。
能够让新会员读懂我们的作品和创意。
2.关键是涉及各位作品的评论和内容。是否欠当？
最了解你们作品的人不是我，是你们自己。如有不妥，请修订。
我看好这篇小文，这是第一次我们写我们自己的故事。
3.同是我也在思考如何将华容道程序化。 第4节做一些细微的改动：
原文：“其工作量也是不小，整个仿真过程包含了多个单一仿真的过程，模型涉及到explicit, 复杂接触，材料失效破坏，加载速度，位移载荷，amplitude，是个很好的教程。”
改为：“其工作量也是不小，整个模型包含了多种较复杂的仿真问题，如显式动力分析、复杂接触、材料失效破坏、选择合理的加载速度、施加位移载荷等，是一个很好的 ABAQUS 仿真范例。”
你全文已经写的很好了，如果一定要再上一层楼的话，是否可以把立意再拔高点，跳出对单个作品的描述，谈谈仿真竞赛本身的意义（创新、继承、想象、国内科技创新的匮乏等等），具体的我也不知该怎么写，只是大致有这么个思路。 谢谢 aba_aba, 我已修订。
我也 PM 给了另外三人 zxzxzx00 xiaov hjli6
所以我在等他们的意见和建议，
全部修订完了，我发邮件给你。
立意太高不好写，我暂时也写不了这样的大文章。
我们小杂志、小竞赛目前暂时还是以培养人才练兵为主。 语言组织表达我的不会。:L :L aba_aba,
That's my latest version, I think it polished.
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